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Haiku

By Sonia Heidi UnruhPublished 8 months ago β€’ Updated 16 days ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - May 2024
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Photo: Pixabay

Wings arrow sunward

piercing sapphire; bloody light

slowly sieves to stars.

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About the Creator

Sonia Heidi Unruh

I love: my husband and children; all who claim me as family or friend; the first bite of chocolate; the last blue before sunset; solving puzzles; stroking cats; finding myself by writing; losing myself in reading; the Creator who is love.

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    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • Anna 13 days ago

    Congrats on Top Story!

  • Caroline Jane16 days ago

    Oh yeah. Sonia, this is stunning! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

  • angela hepworth16 days ago

    Congrats on top story!

  • Gloria Penelope16 days ago

    congratulations on top story.

  • Congrats for the top story.

  • D. J. Reddall16 days ago

    An arresting haiku! Congratulations for the richly merited TS distinction!

  • Very stunning work ❀️❀️❀️

  • Christy Munson16 days ago

    Breathtaking visuals. Love this Haiku! Congratulations on Top Story! πŸ₯³

  • Paul Stewart16 days ago

    Well...it took them quite a while to make it, but congrats on Top Story, Sonia!

  • Tiffany Gordon 5 months ago

    gorgeous work Sonia!

  • Novel Allen7 months ago

    This is actually quite deep, wonderful perspective of light.

  • Babs Iverson7 months ago

    Descriptive and beautiful!!! Love this!!!

  • Perfect picture - haiku combination!

  • Ward Norcutt8 months ago

    a wonderful piece, Sonja. Fantastic imagery - truly.

  • Mackenzie Davis8 months ago

    Oh just stunning imagery here, Sonia. Breathtaking. "seives to stars"-- I love imagining that transition, up up up.

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  • You packed a lot in so few words. Nicely done, Sonia!

  • Alex H Mittelman 8 months ago

    Fantastic Haiku!

  • Joelle EπŸŒ™8 months ago

    This is just gorgeous! The word choice-wow!

  • Paul Stewart8 months ago

    Love this! so much drama in so few words!

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