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Daunting Sober

🌝when The Moon Strikes Full!

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 9 months ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read
Daunting Sober
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It was in my Grasps

And I was holding on...

I tugged on a rope

That was heavy as a stone.

I wasn’t thinking right

Damn, How could I

Get it wrong?

Climbing up,

And still falling down...

I stood up and paced

My feet on the

Solid Ground...

Sensuous Feelings between the

Hours of the Night!

My translucent conductive layers

Of Personality was conversing with


I cringe when,

Something else

Was insight...

I propelled


But it was


A Ray

Of Light!

Weird Dreams, Full Moonshine, and the Melodies of the night!

Swallowed My Reality

In My Pillow.

Daunting Sober...

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  • Veronica Coldiron9 months ago

    This purports the reader right into your dream. Great job!

  • Gina C.9 months ago

    Wonderful! It’s always the pillow that greets us back to the real world… loved it!

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  • Cathy holmes9 months ago

    Beautiful piece.

  • Julia Schulz9 months ago

    Lovely work!

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