Dark Side of the Mountain
By Angel Whelan
By Angel WhelanPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
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Art by Josu Solano
Your summit lured them.
Now lifeless dolls, dreams destroyed.
Shattered on your slopes.
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About the Creator
Angel Whelan
Angel Whelan writes the kind of stories that once had her checking her closet each night, afraid to switch off the light.
Finalist in the Vocal Plus and Return of The Night Owl challenges.
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Excellent storytelling
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Comments (6)
Oooh, kudos! This is well done!
Gorgeous piece. So powerful. Well done.
Love the dark and almost fantasy feel to this, and the picture is so perfect!
Absolutely loved that you went on a darker path for your poem. This would definitely stand out! I loved it!
Very dark but fantastic.
I loved the dark tone to this one!! Excellent work :)