Daring Hearts!!
Like an astronaut lost in a space I wander, seeking answers in uncertain haze In desolate corners hope's whispers fade Yet I yearn for love's touch, its sweet melody.
Haunting nights veiled in mystery's cloak
Torn between the might decisions provoke
Should I succumb to love's tender grasp
Or Should I not fear clenching fast.
Take the oath to love, a whispered vow
To make him my treasure sacred and true
Bestow no measure with unbridled affection
No boundaries or limits, a divine connection.
Till my soul parts my body in life's twilight
To carry a symbol, his right rite
To identify myself as belonging, cuffed
To love and cherish an eternal bind.
I stared at the night sky wondering
What will tomorrow breed, what dreams may bring
I don't want to bleed a heart smashed apart
But love's allure captivates my very heart.
Daily emotional conquest, battles unfurled
Seemed as though I fell into a forced quest
To find happiness for someone not myself
In desperate times my spirit seeks solace.
Every day my actions never seemed enough
Aching doubts cast shadows, the road feels tough
I wondered, is this meant to keep the fire burning
Not even my birthdays are a worry they keep turning.
And yet you say you want to marry me dear
A promise so weighty laden with fear
Will it bring joy's embrace, or endless strife?
The future's unknown, like a flickering light.
Like an astronaut lost in a space
I wander, seeking answers in uncertain haze
In desolate corners hope's whispers fade
Yet I yearn for love's touch, its sweet melody.
But amongst the doubts a flicker of faith
A glimmering star guiding my wraith
For in your eyes, a reflection I see
The mirror of love, reflecting the key.
With you, I find solace, my heart's sanctuary
Together we'll dance embracing life's quandary
With every step our bond shall grow deary
Unfolding a love story, only we will know.
Torn between the might, I take the chance,
For in your arms I find true romance,
No longer haunted by doubts of the past,
With you, my love, a forever that will last.
Bound by love's oath we will transcend all bounds,
United, we conquer, the world around,
In your love's shelter, my soul finds rest,
A sanctuary of love, where we're truly blessed.
So let us embark on this journey untold,
A twist woven with love's purest gold,
Together we'll conquer life's caved maze,
And find our own rhythm, through nights and days.
For love's allure, knows no confines,
It soars on wings, as freedom unwraps,
In this vast nebula, our hearts shall align,
As two souls twined, forever be mine.
About the Creator
Shari Gailla
From nursing to history's embrace, I heal bodies and ignite minds. Writing whispers my tales, bridging past and present, introverted yet expressive. Words paint a vivid world, where healing and curiosity dance hand in hand. #NurseOfWords
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