Damaged In Lonesome
Able with Wounds
Imagination of possible sequels steers in depths of my psyche.
Drowning with uneasiness, suspicion and turmoil.
Consumed by shadows yet to subsist.
Hasty behaviors twine rationale with soul in scattered directions.
Enclosed to grasp feasible knowledge.
Hesitant with delay.
Alarming vibrations signal through the chest.
Heart speaks in distress.
Gasping for vital energy to sustain.
Adopting sedatives to reduce discomfort.
Bypassing the origin with stimuli.
Wounds dishonored without say.
How much more can be endured.
Lonesome will not stay.
Crowds much alike battle this everyday.
Accessible support in reachable selections.
Decision is choice, choice is change.
You are treasure even in pain.
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This felt so raw and real. The last line really got me. Wonderful poetry :)
Awesome!!! Hearted!!!
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This was emotional and uplifting. Loved the last line very much!