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A hopeless romantic

By FfPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read

Certainly! Here's the proofread version of your poem with just grammar corrections:

I'm currently watching you from afar,

Without even knowing who you are.

I'd like to get to know you,

This pretty face of yours,

Is it really true?

Could we be each other's source?

You notice me and start walking in my direction,

My knees are getting weak as I think of a greeting.

What if all I can get is rejection,

To my warm heart's seeking?

The steps are getting louder as I remain silent,

My hands shake nervously as you smile at me.

I finally encourage myself to say something,

A quiet hello is on its way to flow to you,

The second I realize this was a dumb thing.

You walk past me with a weird look and hug another girl,

Like I've never been held before.

Now I am standing here,

Red like a tomato,

Embarrassed to the core.

Please note that I made some minor changes to improve the grammar and punctuation. If you have any further questions or require additional assistance, feel free to ask!

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