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Crucible

Quadru-haiku

By M DannenfelserPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read
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In her heated gaze

Gales of the squall, bind me to

Darkened ocean floor

_____

Her caress was the

Boiling tide, washing away

Sands of my restraint

_____

She wretched the air from

My lungs, the blood from my veins

Still I burned for her

_____

Like a match against

The striking plate of my heart

We're nothing but flame

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About the Creator

M Dannenfelser

Married Midwesterner who loves reading, writing, and cats.

Part-time daydreamer, full-time nerd.

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