My perspiration doused the sheets.
You used to be like every other person
however at that point
the manner in which you hurt me (fingers, teeth):
I became used to it
then, at that point, I ached for it
then I got exhausted
furthermore, different men attempted to place passing into my mouth.
Other-worldly Richie with indentations
in such a perfect room.
I lament mess however I truly do like blossoms.
A tall drinking glass loaded up with peonies
the shade of clothing.
I like hard and old style.
The roof dark like Caravaggio's wine.
Through the blinds, dark divine beings sparkled,
making the diagrams of my body
a sort of void.
The roof fan
pushed heat around
despite the fact that it was snowing outside.
You excused
my adoration for surfaces.
It's anything but a misfortune we could never have a youngster.
I had an aggravation inside me
also, I wanted you to develop it.
About the Creator
L.Soufiane
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Excellent storytelling
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