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Crazy?

as opposed to what?

By BrenPublished 4 years ago • Updated 4 years ago • 1 min read

i was goin to get written off

you know…really smashed

so i bought a bottle

because i had the cash

there are many great expectations

but none greater than this

and i cant just wash them away

with a cheap bottle of piss

you got me going crazy

in so many different ways

you got me counting slowly

minutes hours days

(till i see you again)

you got me going crazy

(going crazy)

sort of in control,

but everything’s kind of lazy

you got me going crazy

(going crazy)

look into my eyes, look and see my hazy

(…and it’s brilliant)

i lay there half drunk

wishing you were here

the room was spinning my head was swimming

but my thoughts were crystal clear

i was hoping that you would come

and knock upon my door

but the fog of a drunken reality descended

so i simply drank some more

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Bren

“I know what I mean it to be and respect that someone else may read something entirely different.” Me

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    Written by Bren