Counting Love, Losing Count
In a Garden of uncertainty; Me and my petals

Petal off— another petal
Three words for one and two for the other
"I love you", "I don't"
"I love you", "I don't"
And my flower's at its end
.
Every petal— A new hope
Every sepal—A whimsical
It's not a tale, but my heart’s overflow
Was it nothing or the whisper of a new start?
Another petal; "I love you"
.
My love can't be counted over flowers
For inside I know my heart is yours
What if the spikes cut my skin?
I love the RED, even in blood
Your fragrance blooms within my
Soul
.
I could hear you say, "I'm all yours";
No wonder that sound was a flow of dream
The last flower; A last Rose
The last petal; I lost the count
.
"I love you?" or "I don't?"
A question that would always haunt
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Author's note:
Disclaimer: This poem ain't about me. lol
Just to clarify, this poem isn’t about me! Haha. I came across an image on Pinterest, and it sparked this poem. I couldn't help but write it down—so here it is!
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
Life already feels like 28!
I write what I believe in
Life's HARD, trust me! I'm already a little tired. But, I gotta live anyway!
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