Could you Repeat that?
Sorry :/
Dare
I
Say what I was
Thinking?
Really, I meant to listen,
And just because I
Can’t remember a single word
That you said doesn’t mean
I don’t care. I was just wondering,
On a different train of thought, if
Narwhals’ existence surprised you too?
About the Creator
Abigail Penhallegon
I'm an aspiring novelist. I've started many stories and just recently become more confident in my abilities due to the encouragement of great friends and teachers. I'd like to spread joy through my writing, so prepare for happy endings. :)
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Comments (29)
Well done love those opening lines Dare I say what I was thinking
I love the last line! I absolutely relate! There are so many things that are so different in the world, I find myself distracted by them too!
This is perfect! Love the rhythm <3
Very playful poem! A fun read!
I love the acrostic poem. This piece is very good. Congratulations on Top Story!
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This was so clever and a lot of fun, Abigail and frankly, very relatable! Congrats on Top Story. I love your language throughout, but the real beauty is in the final line!
As a person who often dissociates, this resonated with me deeply! Loved your acrostic!
Write that novel Abby! 🌈🍀⭐️
Excellent acrostic; I love that surprise ending so much! 🤗❤️ This poem is relatable because I'm always the one far off in Lala land while someone is talking 😅 Congratulations on Top Story!! 🤗❤️
Congratulations on the top story😊💕
🎉 Might have a winner here! Congratulations on top story!
This is very good. I couldn't help but laugh out loud at the end. Congrats on the Top Story.
HA! This is fantastic! Loved it! Subscribed!
I didn’t even realize it was an acrostic, nevermind for the challenge! Great job on this one, it has a strong voice and a great rhythm. I think I read it like 5 times!
You create a great poem from word distraction. Congratulations.
LOL!! This is like talking to every one of my kids. Wonderfully written :) Congratulations on Top Story!
I can relate to this distraction. Great Poem.
Hmmm,so touching
This is perfection. I'd be very surprised if you didn't place for this challenge. Well done.
Magnificent!!! Congratulations on TOP stoey!!!❤️❤️💕
Beautifully crafted. Loved it.
Love this one!
Narwhals forever! I love how you have done this! Congrats on TS! Kudos
Oh, Dare, you genius, you've captured my attention with your whimsical words! 😜😂🙌