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Confined Flames: A Poem of Raw Desire and Trapped Emotions
Trapped in a confined space, two souls find a raw and desperate passion that burns brighter for its limitations. This free verse poem explores themes of claustrophobia, unspoken desires, and the consuming fire of forbidden love. As their bodies ignite and their breaths mingle, they find a twisted freedom within their captivity. Will their passion consume them or set them ablaze? Dive into this evocative poem and experience the thrilling yet unsettling dance between confinement and unleashing desires.
Cartography of Desire
In the cramped, fading fire space
where spooks writhe like restless animals
I'm trapped with you, our skeletons
tangled in a knot of desperation
The air reeks of stale sweat
and yesterday's regret
our breathing, a syncopated rhythm
that underscores the tension
Your eyes, like two splintered mirrors
reflect the darkness within
as you grasp my wrist, a vice-like grip
that holds me in place, a captive
The walls, a cold, unforgiving slab
that presses in, a physical weight
our skin, a composition of suppressed desires
etched with the lines of unspoken needs
Your mouth, a indistinct foretell
of release, of freedom from this cage
as you draw closer, your hot breath
a branding iron that sears my skin
In this confined, airless space
our bodies, a slow-burning fire
that consumes us, a hunger
that cannot be satiated, only fed
The sound of our ragged breathing
is the only backing track we need
as we lose ourselves in the echoes
of our confinement, our passion
Your fingers, a slow, deliberate exploration
of my skin, a topography of desire
as you map the lineaments of my anatomy
like a cartographer charting uncharted territory
In this dark, cramped space
we find a strange, twisted freedom
our passion, a wild, unbridled thing
that cannot be contained, only unleashed
© 2024 Kingsley Gomes. All rights reserved.
About the Creator
Kingsley Gomes, PhD.
Professional engineer with a passion for storytelling, crafting compelling narratives that explore the human experience. Author of poetry, short stories, and inspirational articles, weaving words into emotional journeys.
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