you were my ocean and sky;
then you became a basic
sheet of white paper that just
refused to be colored.
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Diani Alvarenga
“I write to give myself strength. I write to be the characters that I am not. I write to explore all the things I'm afraid of.”
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Unfortunately, that's what people do. They change. Loved your poem!
Thank you for introducing me to a form of poetry I did not know about. I found out the specifics from Writer's Digest...really uncanny since I literally just published a story about Writer's Digest's May/June 2023 issue. As a lover of all things Japanese, this was a really nice read and learning experience.
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