David Balyeat | Tuweep, Grand Canyon
Sunrise Chased
Scene Unfolding
Light Bending
Heart Pounding
Patience Tested
Emotions High
Magic Unfolding
Focus Sharp
Adrenaline Pumping
Passion Activated
Senses Explode
*CLICK*
Sensor Exposed
Photons Converted
Scene Compiled
Unique Moment–
Captured
About the Creator
Kristen Balyeat
Words fly to me on the wind, bump into me as I'm strolling the city, splash me in the face while I rest by the river, and shake me awake in the middle of the night– I’m humbly one of the many vessels they use to come to life.
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Comments (10)
Spectacular photography!! 😃 I don’t remember getting notifications of some of these micro-fictions & poems of yours. Although I did have a day or two off last week. 😊
You're so good at capturing moments and breaking them down until we *feel* them, Kristen! Amazing job on this one too 🤗
Goodness, Kristen! So talented. I loved the formatting and just how every single word worked damn hard for you! You make these kinds of pieces seem so effortless! Well done!
Breathlessly, breathtakingly beautiful & satisfying.
That works simply and brilliantly!
This was so cool. Wow how the *CLICK* just L A N D S so profoundly. Amazingly well done. Question for you that I hope doesn't drive you nuts: Is the final line a statement or a question?
Chippety choppety short lines really work for this 😁
Very good idea very well executed. That was terrific Kristen!
Those short, rapid fire phrases allowed the excitement and sensations to burst through! Loved it :)
Great poem.. I like how you indirectly talked about sight.. and I love how you connected "senses explode" and "sensor exposed" 👍🏽👍🏽