Cheating
Mikeydred's End Of 2022 Poetry Challenge - Dharrsheena Raja Segarran. Also My thirty-seventh dark poem in the series inspired by her
This is a series of short sonnets based on suggestions by Vocal friends. I will include a suitable video as well. The original challenge piece is at the end of this poem.
The challenge is βgive me a subject and five words and I will try and create a sonnetβ.
This is from Dharrsheena Raja Segarran:
Subject: Cheating
Words: Dentist, Petty, Chapter, Ancestor, Peel
This is also my thirty-seventh dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.
The music is "The Card Cheat" by The Clash from "London Calling"
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You Said You Were A Qualified Dentist
The Marathon Man Bloodstains, Broken Teeth
Bleeding Mouth Your Petty Hate A Menace
The Next Chapter On Your Funeral Wreath
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Said Your Ancestor Was Jack The Ripper
That You Would Peel The Skin From Your Victim
Think That Mutilation Makes You Hipper
That You Have A Perfect Murder System
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You Leave A Trail Of Body Parts And Blood
But The Vengeful Police Now Have Your Scent
You Think You'll Escape, You Said That You Would
But Your Hanging'll Be A Major Event
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Your Body Will Dangle From A Dark Noose
Hangman Will Punish Your Lifetime Abuse
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Whoaaaa, you're like super awesomeeee! You managed to use all 5 words within the first 2 stanzas! Very well executed sonnet! Loved how dark this was!
Oh, you sick puppy. Wonderful