I have come to the realization that my husband
Finds me cute in the simplest of moments
Adores me as I walk across stone or simply stand.
He composes in his head loving sonnets
Of my tedious steps, my smile, my garment.
In his eyes I am clad in valor and splendor
So refined , charming and resplendent
As I climb to the edge of waterfalls to adventure.
His eyes are focused on me in enchantment
As the fall's mist sprays over my center
And onto my lashes in clings. In excitement,
I yip over the yell of water, and, to love surrender.
Oh, if only we could all see ourselves as those who love us do. What wonder would be behold?
About the Creator
Laura Lann
I am an author from deep East Texas with a passion for horror and fantasy, often heavily mixed together. In my spare time, when I am not writing, I draw and paint landscape and fantasy pieces. I now reside in Alaska where adventures await.
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That's a love poem and a half is that. I hope he looks at you as though you just hung the stars 😁
Awww, you guys are so adorable and your poem was so wonderful!