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Challenging times

I need to win, then I promise to shut up my din.

By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published about a year ago • 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Challenging times

In a challenge,

what I need is to

have my poems read,

commented and hearted.

No, not all,

there’s too many for that.

What about 10?

You could easy do that?

This week, not many liked my stuff.

Am I losing my gift?

Are my poems stuffed?

Only good to put in a loo.

I just don’t know what to do.

So if you read this poem moan,

like and comment

where it hits the spine bone.

If you hate it, pig off,

pass it all by.

Leave me alone in loo,

Waving all my poetry good bye

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About the Creator

♿ V+ Marie381Uk

Poetry has lived in me since childhood.

Ink spills the feelings words fear to say.

My poems heal, some haunt, all are pieces of me.

Stay and read please. Like&follow me. If my poetry touches your ♥️ maybe leave a small tip

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk