Broken Promises
Even the most solid things can break.
By F Cade SwansonPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
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"Forever," he said.
"Like a mountain, eternal."
And then walked away.
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F Cade Swanson
Queer dad from Virginia now living and writing in the Pacific Northwest. Dad poems, sad poems, stories about life. Read more at fcadeswanson.com
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Ouch. My heart strings just snapped. Impactful, as a Haiku should be. Wow. I get everything from this one.
In the briefest of poetic styles you have created deeply moving piece.