Broken In Pieces
A Pantoum Inspired By Words, Events And A Bouke de Vries Image

Introduction
Another personal poem, inspired by that image and the feeling that I am unwanted here and need to leave.
Actually having written this I feel good, but this is for those that feel this way. just to know there are others.
The music is "I Fall To Pieces" by Cyndi Lauper, the original was by Patsy Cline, and it has been covered by Leanne Rimes.
The full title of the image is:
Blue ground memory vessel with wax seals, 18th century Chinese blue ground (Qing dynasty) vase, glass, ceramic parchment, string and wax. Diam 410 x 545 mx
This is the fifth poem I have written inspired by the images of Bouke de Vries.
Broken In Pieces
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I Am Always Told I Am Too Rough
There's Always Something Better Than Me
I Tried So Hard, It's Never Enough
So Maybe I Should Just Let It Be
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There's Always Something Better Than Me
That Always Tears My Soul To Pieces
So Maybe I Should Just Let It Be
I Try Calm, But Worry Increases
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That Always Tears My Soul To Pieces
There Is No Answer That I Can See
I Try Calm, But Worry Increases
Of This Darkness, I Cannot Be Free
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There Is No Answer That I Can See
I Am Always Told I Am Too Rough
Of This Darkness, I Cannot Be Free
I Tried So Hard, It's Never Enough
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