Breaching Story
a vision
By Ward NorcuttPublished 5 months ago • Updated 5 months ago • 1 min read
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Swim in the sea road
without horizon
nor compass knowing
you are ever
only swimming
*
Dive beyond the depths
care less the fathoms
pressing you insignificant
seeming bound
for you
*
only
*
breach through the weighty darkness
your currency of story
casting you finite
fated forever
only
*
And discover glory
About the Creator
Ward Norcutt
Playwright and poet.
My goal as a writer is to write thoughtful pieces of prose, poetry and stage plays. Hopefully, the end results are entertaining and engaging, with layers of meaning that make sense to the whole or a theme therein.
Comments (8)
To be free, you are the essence of what all dream to be.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Your diction is surprising, just as poetry ought to be. I find myself more compelled by how you structured this one, and chose the words, than by other poems on the same theme. It takes a deep truth, self-imposed restriction as lifelong shackles, and turns it into an anthem of freedom. Like, actual freedom. Not just liberty. How absolutely marvelous. "Dive beyond the depths care less the fathoms pressing you insignificant seeming bound for you" My favorite part. "Pressing you insignificant" and "care less the fathoms" just sound so profound. The meter in them is beautiful.
Gorgeous! Enjoyed this beautiful journey into freedom by simply...swimming.
This felt so liberating! Loved your poem!
Oh to be boundless.
That pic is perfect. I felt that upward WHOOSH reading it 😁
Uplifting & motivating!!! Loved it!!!💕❤️❤️