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Blue Eyes

A haiku

By Beverley RidleyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Blue Eyes
Photo by Aziz Acharki on Unsplash

Cerulean eyes;

glazed, unseeing. One last kiss,

placed on blue tinged lips

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Beverley Ridley

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  • Gigi Gibsonabout a year ago

    Beautiful and sad at the same time… if I’ve understood this correctly. Is it the kiss after death?

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