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Blue-Eyed Baby

A Single Mother's Love Through The Pain

By Misty RaePublished 2 months ago β€’ 1 min read
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Blue-Eyed Baby
Photo by Jan Canty on Unsplash

Blueberry twinkles,

Turn the sorrow to pure joy

You have "Daddy's eyes."

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About the Creator

Misty Rae

Retired legal eagle, nature love, wife, mother of boys and cats, chef, and trying to learn to play the guitar. I play with paint and words. Living my "middle years" like a teenager and loving every second of it!

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  • The Invisible Writer2 months ago

    Very good

  • Gabriel Huizenga2 months ago

    This is so sweet and profound!

  • Jason Basaraba2 months ago

    You said a lot, well done

  • Parvathi J2 months ago

    beauty love <3

  • Rochelle Harper2 months ago

    Simple, beautiful, and impactful. I love it!

  • the cutest little one

  • Harmony Kent2 months ago

    This is beautiful! πŸ’•πŸ™‚

  • kiwigambler2 months ago

    wow

  • Paige DePoe2 months ago

    I thought to comment a compliment, then caught the subtitle..Bravo! Hit it right home !

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    Absolutely wonderful haiku; full of love yet bittersweet.

  • Thayrile2 months ago

    Nice πŸ‘

  • LIMA2 months ago

    So cute Blue-Eyed Baby and amazing haiku. I am also thinking about mother's pain for writing!!

  • Adlyne Faith2 months ago

    This. Is. Just. Amazing! Within three lines, you have managed to describe how you feel about having the tiny Angel, but also expressed your pain that is reflected in the baby's eye 'You have "Daddy's eyes." reminding you of whom you have lost.

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  • Kendall Defoe2 months ago

    Adorkable!

  • Clyde E. Dawkins2 months ago

    Beautiful and precious!

  • Blake S2 months ago

    Aww! Nice job!

  • Dana Stewart2 months ago

    So sweet! Love it!

  • Gina B.2 months ago

    This is simple, sweet, and so full of love!

  • Scott Wade2 months ago

    Sweet poem. πŸ₯°

  • Rasma Raisters2 months ago

    Lovely

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    Beautiful

  • So many emotions at once - great job!

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