Blueberry twinkles,
Turn the sorrow to pure joy
You have "Daddy's eyes."
About the Creator
Misty Rae
Retired legal eagle, nature love, wife, mother of boys and cats, chef, and trying to learn to play the guitar. I play with paint and words. Living my "middle years" like a teenager and loving every second of it!
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When Jesus didn't answer me.
I was standing alone in a desert. It was windy and dark. The sun had already gone over the horizon, and night had come down to face me. By then I understood that darkness is inevitable and that we are only passing through as guests. I could only spot a few specific lights in this seemingly abandoned little town. Hopefully, there was someone to help me find a place where I could spend the night. My first stop was usually a fire station.
By Oleksandr Matvyeyev5 days ago in Wander
Comments (39)
Very good
This is so sweet and profound!
You said a lot, well done
beauty love <3
Simple, beautiful, and impactful. I love it!
the cutest little one
This is beautiful! 💕🙂
wow
I thought to comment a compliment, then caught the subtitle..Bravo! Hit it right home !
adorable story, thank you for sharing!
Absolutely wonderful haiku; full of love yet bittersweet.
Nice 👍
So cute Blue-Eyed Baby and amazing haiku. I am also thinking about mother's pain for writing!!
This. Is. Just. Amazing! Within three lines, you have managed to describe how you feel about having the tiny Angel, but also expressed your pain that is reflected in the baby's eye 'You have "Daddy's eyes." reminding you of whom you have lost.
🥹💙
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Adorkable!
Beautiful and precious!
Aww! Nice job!
So sweet! Love it!
This is simple, sweet, and so full of love!
Sweet poem. 🥰
Lovely
Beautiful
So many emotions at once - great job!