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Blossoming Thoughts

For Hannah's Community Renga

By Rachel DeemingPublished about a month ago 1 min read
Blossoming Thoughts
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Rain sends my blossoming thoughts

Journeying onwards to home.


This has been written in response to Hannah Moore's challenge which you can read here as it continues to flower:

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Rachel Deeming

Storyteller. Poet. Reviewer. Traveller.

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  • Novel Allen27 days ago

    I kinda missed this one. Very interesting.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    This was soooo beautiful! Loved your lines Rach!

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    Pretty phrasing! Great on its own and as an extension of the renga

  • Joe O’Connorabout a month ago

    Love how this can read as melancholic or upbeat, depending on your frame of mind. Nice one Rachel🤗

  • Tiffany Gordon about a month ago

    Beautiful work Rachel!

  • John Coxabout a month ago

    Paul’s right. This does stand well on its own. Beautiful!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    Gorgeous, thank you so much.

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    Ohhhh...me like this on its own, let alone part of the renga. Well done, chum-chum-cha-reeeeeee! lol. I'm waking up and just found a whole bunch of Ms Moore so getting my head round it and preparing to Renga.

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