Bittersweet Release
(For Cole)
"It’s time"
...............
I don’t want to
hear it
Let me hold
your paws once more
one tear, then two
they fall and fall
...............
The best big boy
from day one
I long to rub your
dark, inky coat
gaze into your eyes
see your old soul
(Oh, the hurt)
...............
"It’s time"
...............
I don’t want to
feel this
Let me go
you seem to say
with a worn look
and a long sigh
...............
No, let’s go back
to days gone by
Romp in the yard
get that red ball
rest in the cool ivy
bark, pant, grin
(Oh, this pain)
...............
"It’s time"
...............
I don’t want to
do this
Let me have
one last wet kiss
tell the doc to
wait, just wait
...............
The room is warm
all has gone hush
You shut your eyes
no howl, no fuss
one tear, then two
ok, make the call
(Oh, my boy)
...............
"It’s time"
About the Creator
Heather Hagy
Stephen King fan (but not like Annie "I'm your #1 fan" Wilkes cuz I'm sane and she's not)
Horror/supernatural are my favorite writing genres
Wife to 1 and mom to 4 humans, 4 dogs, 6 cats, and a dragon
"Jaws" is the greatest movie ever
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Comments (4)
Great job congratulations
I'm so sorry for your loss 🥺 Beautiful poem!
Heartbreaking, yet beautiful. Excellent job Heather!
Oh, my heart! This is so sad but such a wonderful and heartfelt entry 🥹❤️