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Bird Seed

Feeders Full

By Moe RadosevichPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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Bird Seed
Photo by Bonnie Kittle on Unsplash

the human filled our feeders today,

I could barely wait until he walked away,

sitting in the tree, I’m watching him pour,

saying to myself, more, more, more;

the berry suet’s by far the best,

two beaks full of it may I request,

the sunflower seeds taste like rays of sun,

water in the birdbath, for a drink when I’m done,

we love our human, don’t know his name,

but our bellies are full, and he’s to blame.

Hope you enjoyed this as much as I enjoyed writing it, sitting on the deck watching my little friends eat.

Thanks for reading!!

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Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

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Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you

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  • Phil Flannery11 months ago

    That was a well needed bit of positivity, for my chilly winter morning. It warmed me up. Nicely composed.

  • C. H. Richard11 months ago

    One part of my day I love is feeding the birds. I swear they are waiting each morning just as you described ❤️

  • Dana Crandell11 months ago

    I can hear the birds at our feeders saying this. Great job!

  • Kalina Bethany11 months ago

    This piece is so fun, I could almost picture it😊

  • Awww, this was just so sweet!

  • ❤️❤️❤️❤️

  • Cathy holmes11 months ago

    This is a lovely piece. Well done.

  • Gina C.11 months ago

    Charming!! I love how it’s from the bird’s perspective 🥰 Fun and sweet :)

  • L.C. Schäfer11 months ago

    I don't buy the berry suet anymore. The dog got into the last bag, and I was cleaning up her runny pink poop for two days 😮 But I love feeding "our" sparrows. They come right up to the window and tap on it 😁

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