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Between Candle and Smoke

A Sonnet on Memory and Loss

By Tim CarmichaelPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Top Story - October 2025
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I hold your absence like a struck match glow,

Bright at the edges where my fingers burn,

While darkness pools in places I can't know,

The rooms you've left, the paths of no return.

Each memory flares, your laughter, sudden gold,

Then smoke that curls away before I breathe.

I build you up with light, but can't take hold

Of shadows that through every story weave.

Perhaps this is the bargain love demands

To carry both the candle and its death,

To dream you whole while knowing empty hands,

To speak your name and lose it in my breath.

Thus, must I bear this dusk that will not stay,

An ache of light, a comfort in decay.

Sonnet

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Let your becoming be louder than your fear, and your smallest steps become the road you once thought impossible to walk. An Appalachian poet and cookbook author my book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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    Written by Tim Carmichael