Best Friend
In love with your best friend? You aren't alone.
When I looked into your eyes,
there were some sparks in the sky.
I knew I loved you
but never knew if you loved me too.
* * *
I was too scared to ask.
But at last,
I want you to know.
You're the only one to make me happy when I feel low.
* * *
I don't this to be the end
Of us being best friends
But I have always loved you.
Do you love me too?
* * * * * * * * * *
I'm sure I will write an updated version later on, after I tell her about it. Hopefully, she feels the same but, if not, crying is always a viable option.
About the Creator
Rene Peters
I write what I know, usually in the form of poetry. I tend to lean towards mental health, epilepsy, and loss/grieving.
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Comments (5)
Crying does help sometimes! ❤️
Too relatable, unfortunately 😢♥️♥️
Awww, this was so wonderful!
Beautiful, heartfelt poem! Amazing :)
Outstanding!!!💖💕