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Below Ocean Sheen

Sink, sink, down further

By Meagan DionPublished about a year ago โ€ข 1 min read
Below Ocean Sheen
Photo by Alice Alinari on Unsplash

Light can barely reach

Distant, hidden, cobalt world

Bubbles, silence, peace

sad poetry

About the Creator

Meagan Dion

My life is a little crazy. Four kids, homeschool, write, create and coffee. Coffee is a verb. Do you coffee? I aspire to blow glass and finish / publish my novel. I would like to have an impact. Also, coffee.

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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • Mother Combs6 months ago


  • Loryne Andaweyabout a year ago

    Your poetry sent me floating in a peaceful moment. Thank you. :)

  • Abigail Penhallegonabout a year ago

    I like your last line. :)

  • Oneg In The Arcticabout a year ago

    Really beautiful poem, has a good flow to it

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago


  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    This Haiku is so relatable and beautiful๐Ÿ’™ Love the image you chose too. Many days I feel like her

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Oh wow. Exceptional!

  • Mhairi Campbell about a year ago


  • Caroline Janeabout a year ago

    That is a breath stealer. ๐Ÿ‘

  • Joe Pattersonabout a year ago

    good job.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago


  • Gina C.about a year ago

    So gorgeous, lovely imagery. Left love :)

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    That's powerful. Well done

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Wow, you painted such a vivid picture with so few words. Well done!

  • Deanna Fratusabout a year ago

    Very nice. I like it.

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