Below Ocean Sheen
Sink, sink, down further
Photo by Alice Alinari on Unsplash
Light can barely reach
Distant, hidden, cobalt world
Bubbles, silence, peace
About the Creator
My life is a little crazy. Four kids, homeschool, hotel clerk, write, create and coffee. Coffee is a verb. Do you coffee? I aspire to blow glass and finish / publish my novel. I would like to have an impact. Also, coffee.
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Your poetry sent me floating in a peaceful moment. Thank you. :)
I like your last line. :)
Really beautiful poem, has a good flow to it
This Haiku is so relatable and beautiful💙 Love the image you chose too. Many days I feel like her
Oh wow. Exceptional!
That is a breath stealer. 👍
So gorgeous, lovely imagery. Left love :)
That's powerful. Well done
Wow, you painted such a vivid picture with so few words. Well done!
Very nice. I like it.