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Below Ocean Sheen

Sink, sink, down further

By Meagan DionPublished 6 months ago • 1 min read
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Below Ocean Sheen
Photo by Alice Alinari on Unsplash

Light can barely reach

Distant, hidden, cobalt world

Bubbles, silence, peace

sad poetry
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About the Creator

Meagan Dion

My life is a little crazy. Four kids, homeschool, hotel clerk, write, create and coffee. Coffee is a verb. Do you coffee? I aspire to blow glass and finish / publish my novel. I would like to have an impact. Also, coffee.

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  • Loryne Andawey6 months ago

    Your poetry sent me floating in a peaceful moment. Thank you. :)

  • I like your last line. :)

  • Oneg In The Arctic6 months ago

    Really beautiful poem, has a good flow to it

  • Babs Iverson6 months ago

    Beautiful!!!đź’•

  • C. H. Richard6 months ago

    This Haiku is so relatable and beautifulđź’™ Love the image you chose too. Many days I feel like her

  • Dana Stewart6 months ago

    Oh wow. Exceptional!

  • Mhairi Campbell 6 months ago

    Beautiful!

  • Caroline Jane6 months ago

    That is a breath stealer. đź‘Ť

  • Joe Patterson6 months ago

    good job.

  • Babs Iverson6 months ago

    Outstanding!!!

  • Gina C.6 months ago

    So gorgeous, lovely imagery. Left love :)

  • Cathy holmes6 months ago

    That's powerful. Well done

  • Heather Hubler6 months ago

    Wow, you painted such a vivid picture with so few words. Well done!

  • Deanna Fratus6 months ago

    Very nice. I like it.

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