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Beijing 2018

Clean air at last

By Alfie JanePublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Beijing 2018
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Finally! Blue skies!

Natural gas cleaned our air.

No more Beijing cough.

nature poetry
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Alfie Jane

A wandering soul who writes about anything and everything. Former expat, future cook and writer. Will take any challenge that comes her way.

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  • Canuck Scriber L.Lachapelle Authorabout a year ago

    Sweet, perfect haiku.

  • Colt Hendersonabout a year ago

    Really nice.

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Very good!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Terrific!!! Left a heart!!!💕💖😊

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Nicely done

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