Beneath billowing boughs,
Blossoms bloom, blushing,
Breezes brush by,
Bringing buoyancy, brightness.
Bountiful bluebirds bicker,
Barnacles bond, barns beckon,
Babbling brooks bear,
Benevolent beauty, boundless.
Breathe, behold, be beguiled,
Bask, bewitched by bounties,
Blissful balance, bestowed,
Bewildering, boundless, breathtaking.
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M Dannenfelser
Married Midwesterner who loves reading, writing, and cats.
Part-time daydreamer, full-time nerd.
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I love this! It’s giving me Beatrix Potter :)
Beautiful art piece. The verses flow meaningfully and there’s so much peace transmitted by this poem. I can hear the brooks singing and smell fresg air. 😇
Creative writing...............