Sometimes
your bag ain’t big enough to hold all the things you need.
The sad reality,
sometimes your head isn’t big enough either.
And with that overwhelming fed-up feeling,
only then
do you become ruthless about tossing stuff
thought essential
but can most assuredly be done without.
Get rid of extraneous chatter and superfluous decorations.
Consolidate customary courtesies
and dump the damn document delegation.
Too many tasks
tax the grey matter,
make sensory input inconsequential.
If you come through the other side with less
you win
and will be grateful no doubt.
Simplicity is clean fresh air taken in clear blue sky
bringing life back to balance and harmony.
You masterpiece,
complex entity of mind and matter,
spirit and DNA,
molecular-through-subatomic-particle-defying-description.
Nothing else in life need be complicated.
(Originally published on Simily)
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Comments (6)
Rhymes nested within rhymes, deftly and potently expressing truths of which everyone could stand to be reminded regularly. This is why I love poetry.
Your poem was very veryyyy relatable! I often feel overwhemled. So I always need to take a step back, breath and learn to let go. Very beautifully written!
You always have something important to say, and you say it so beautifully. Well done, as always.
Awesome!!! 👏💖😊💕
I love this! I have held on to things for years (not material and non material) because I thought I needed them. Finally letting go of these things gives such a sense of freedom.
An important message for everyone, especially these days. Beautifully expressed, as always.