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A Simplicity Exit Ramp

By The Dani WriterPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Sometimes

your bag ain’t big enough to hold all the things you need.

The sad reality,

sometimes your head isn’t big enough either.

And with that overwhelming fed-up feeling,

only then

do you become ruthless about tossing stuff

thought essential

but can most assuredly be done without.

Get rid of extraneous chatter and superfluous decorations.

Consolidate customary courtesies

and dump the damn document delegation.

Too many tasks

tax the grey matter,

make sensory input inconsequential.

If you come through the other side with less

you win

and will be grateful no doubt.

Simplicity is clean fresh air taken in clear blue sky

bringing life back to balance and harmony.

You masterpiece,

complex entity of mind and matter,

spirit and DNA,

molecular-through-subatomic-particle-defying-description.

Nothing else in life need be complicated.

(Originally published on Simily)

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The Dani Writer

Explores words to create worlds with poetry, nonfiction, and fiction. Writes content that permeates then revises and edits the heck out of it. Interests: Freelance, consultations, networking, rulebook-ripping. UK-based

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  • Jacob Sherman2 years ago

    Rhymes nested within rhymes, deftly and potently expressing truths of which everyone could stand to be reminded regularly. This is why I love poetry.

  • Your poem was very veryyyy relatable! I often feel overwhemled. So I always need to take a step back, breath and learn to let go. Very beautifully written!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    You always have something important to say, and you say it so beautifully. Well done, as always.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Awesome!!! 👏💖😊💕

  • Dawn Salois2 years ago

    I love this! I have held on to things for years (not material and non material) because I thought I needed them. Finally letting go of these things gives such a sense of freedom.

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