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Babel, Revisited?

Another Sky-ku, Inspired by Donna

By Dana CrandellPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read
NYC, 2018 - photo by the author

how high will you climb

as you push my clouds aside

you are not welcome

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Author's Note: This one was inspired by the lovely and talented Donna Fox, with a comment on my previous entry, which could be seen as more of a senryu. With that in mind, I thought I'd create one from the perspective of the sky, itself.

This photo is from the same trip to NYC, taken just before I back headed into Javits Center during a day of work at the Photo Expo. My favorite thing about this one is the juxtaposition of the architecture styles, further emphasized by the reflections of both.

Thanks for reading! Hearts, comments and tips are always appreciated. Also, please check out Donna's stories at the link below. You won't regret it!

Here's a link to the challenge. There's sitll time to get your entry in:

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Dana Crandell

Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.

Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist

My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity

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    Written by Dana Crandell