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Awkward Moments: Comedy Club, Neighbour, Dentist, Birds, Doctor - AKA Snafu Senryu

Bonus Snafu: “I am not crying!” “OK, we’re both crying.” “I’m very happy!” 😩

By Grz ColmPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read
Top Story - November 2023
Awkward Moments: Comedy Club, Neighbour, Dentist, Birds, Doctor - AKA Snafu Senryu
Photo by Tessa Rampersad on Unsplash

A Snafu at the Comedy Club:

“So thanks for coming,”

“You’ve been a great crowd today”

..as three folks applaud.

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A Neighbour Snafu:

“How’s your wife Pippa?”

“That is the name of our dog!”

“Nice weather today!”

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A Dentist Snafu:

“It’s now been two hours,”

“Get your hands out of my mouth!!”

..the poor intern gasps.

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An Unromantic Snafu:

🎵 “Why do birds ap-pear

ev-er-y time, you are near?”.. 🎵

then they shat on you! 😠

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A Doctor Snafu:

“Too many questions!”

“but you are the physician”,

“I pay the big bucks!”

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Notes: Most of these are inspired by myself or other people I know. The really embarrassing snafus are under lock and key - sorry!

Thanks for reading.

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