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A Prayer to The Goddess of Wisdom

By D. J. ReddallPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
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Harken to my entreaty, goddess fair

Deathless, wise, all-conquering Athena

Life without your blessing, I cannot bear

It is a bleak and vicious arena

You sprang from the brow of Zeus, gods’ father

Is my mortal mind fit to be a womb?

From you, wisdom flows like clean, fresh water

What will flow to me, as I near the tomb?

Tritogeneia they name you, maiden

For you came to be near Trio’s rich shore

Truths that from dim, foolish eyes lie hidden

Reveal to me, before I see no more

Grey-eyed queen of tumults and wars, bless me

While yet I breathe, let me your servant be

Sonnet

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D. J. Reddall

I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.

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Comments (19)

  • Emos Sibu Poriei (Kaya)4 months ago

    Congratulations on TS! A well deserved recognition!

  • Anna 4 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳

  • lovely ode to athena

  • Hannah Moore4 months ago

    Feels like a kind of incantation.

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Matthew Mccahey4 months ago

    Love this! I was in Athens last October and this really brought the memories back.

  • Patrick M. Ohana4 months ago

    A beautiful sonnet for my favourite Goddess and deity! I wrote a lot about her : )

  • JBaz4 months ago

    Excellent topic, and very well done. Every lined flowed with grace. Congratulations

  • Dana Crandell4 months ago

    Smooth rhythm and the perfect style to suit the mythological theme. Very well done. Congratulations!

  • Mubarak 4 months ago

    Nicely Done

  • Ashley Shiflett4 months ago

    Wonderful writing! Congrats!

  • Cathy holmes4 months ago

    Beautiful piece. Congrats on the TS.

  • Gerard DiLeo4 months ago

    I'm a sucker for Mythology. This was beautiful enough to be a Sirens' song.

  • Mind writer4 months ago

    Amazing

  • Wow! BEST!

  • Kodah4 months ago

    💖Beautiful poetry created!!💖

  • This felt very liberating to me! Beautiful poem!

  • Test4 months ago

    fantastic writing!

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