We met in a whirlwind
And danced to the thunder crash.
We would not be chagrined
When the world called us rash.
~
Ask me if our love still blooms,
Ask me if it's grown,
Ask me if it outshines the moon,
And the sun's shallow throne.
~
Spring brought its bluster,
We brought our strength.
Love didn't lose its luster,
We ran the course's full length.
~
Ask me if our love still blooms,
Ask me if it's grown,
Ask me if it outshines the moon,
And the sun's shallow throne.
~
Many trials lay before us,
We beat them one by one.
Though the path was treacherous,
We had only just begun.
~
Ask me if our love still blooms,
Ask me if it's grown,
Ask me if it outshines the moon,
And the sun's shallow throne.
~
Now here comes our December,
I hold you oh so near.
Ask me what I remember
At the end of the year.
About the Creator
Catsidhe
Pronounced Cat-she: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cat-s%C3%ACth
A pseudonym, of course,
To allow for open discourse,
Words channeling my lifeforce
Comments (9)
Absolutely stunning! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
Moving piece! Congratulations on your placement in the challenge!
Congratulations!
Lovely poem!
Beautiful poem with a clever ending. Well done!
Very nice!
I sang this to my own tune! So beautifully written!
Fabulous!!! Loving your love poem!!!💕❤️❤️
Wow, it is super suited for a challenge.