Apple Fritters Anonymous
Eating My Feelings. Volume One. Donuts.
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~~Dear Apple Fritter,
Why must you be
so delightfully,
sinfully perfect?
Your icing so crunchy,
so perfectly sweet.
But not too sweet.
Those soft
little chunks
of granny smiths
give you just the right
touch of tartness.
You know,
there are days
I don’t even think of you.
I don’t care
that you’re still one
of life’s little
affordabilities.
Oh, but then,
there’s days like this.
When even the sun
lacked the strength
to rise
to its full height.
When the clouds
Seem to follow me
Everywhere
I force myself to go.
On days like these,
you’re all I think about.
On a plate,
I toast you up just right.
With a big glass of milk,
or perhaps,
an even bigger cup of Joe…
I savor your sweetness,
your gooey perfection
made of dough so dense
and buttery cinnamon.
My tongue craves you
more than my lover’s
soft kisses.
One bite in,
and I feel it—
the release—
Of stress.
Of fear.
My mouth waters.
My mind relaxes.
I close my eyes,
and savor
the perfection of flavor.
And with the last bite,
I sigh
with contentment,
with relief.
At least,
until I open my eyes
and see the truth
right in front of me.
No problems solved.
No anxieties removed.
Only another
wasted calorie.
Another year
of bad health,
or maybe just
one year less
overall.
At the end,
of this binge,
I feel
bloated and weak,
nauseous and full
of loathesome detest
for myself
and this anxiety-ridden life
where I find comfort
in so little
as much as I do
in just a taste
of sugar.
~~Me.
(AFA - Apple Fritters Anonymous)
About the Creator
Lena Folkert
Alaskan Grown Freelance Writer 🤍 Lover of Prose
Former Deckhand & Barista 🤍 Always a Pleaser & Eggshell-Walker
Lifelong Animal Lover & Whisperer 🤍 Ever the Student & Seeker
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Comments (5)
Mmm 😋 I agree we can’t keep trying to eat our feelings away… 🍫🍩🧁🎂🍿🍟🥟🍘🥨🫒so now I only eat when I’m watching something on TV 📺
Shhhhh! No regrets! Enjoy the fritters!
You love your apple fritters, gorgeously tasty challenge entry
This is mouth watering poetry, I don’t feel guilty. Enjoy Dear Apple Fritter, perfect for breakfast. I love how you end the poem . Excellent poem , love it ❤️🥰
Fortunately for me, at the tender young age of 63, before I even finish one apple fritter I begin to feel slightly nauseous. Unfortunately, that doesn't seem to stop me. So now at the age of 63, the only horizons that seem to be expanding for me are my waistline, lol! Absolutely delightful & so true to life.