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Ambivalence

-that deeply awkward moment you feel like a silly rabbit who is tricked easily like a fool, but has to be left in the cold by the person that they thought cared for them.

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 7 months ago β€’ 1 min read
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Ambivalence
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Long bouts, cold shoulder

Like winter, you froze my heart

Silly rabbit, tricks

sad poetry
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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

I am a published author on Patheos,

I am Bexley by Resurgence Novels

The Half Paper Moon on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.

My novella Carnivorous will be published by Eukalypto

& Atonement will be released this August by JMS Books

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  • ThatWriterWoman7 months ago

    This poem is packed full of atmosphere! 'like winter, you froze my heart' acts as a brilliant anchor to the reader, providing just enough narrative to make the other lines have an impact! Masterfully done!

  • ...are for kids, not romance or any kind of mature relationship.

  • Sadly, I'm that rabbit. Your poem resonated so deeply with me. Well done Merly!

  • Dana Crandell7 months ago

    Trix are for kids. Good one, Melissa!

  • Manisha Dhalani7 months ago

    You never know!

  • πŸ‡ tricks are for youngstersβ€¦πŸ˜†πŸ₯ΉπŸ‘»

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