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Alone / Together: A Collection

The Space Between

By Sydney ChapmanPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
Second Place in the Snafu Senryu Challenge
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Alone / Together: A Collection
Photo by ROBIN WORRALL on Unsplash

1) An Awkward Lonliness

We are together,

alone on the last bus ride.

Staring at our phones.

2) Uncomfortable Grief

In my heart we are

together, but alone now.

Cry for all to see.

3) Missed Communication

How much does one miss,

being alone, together,

in the same spaces.

4) Virtual Therapy

Now, I am alone.

Together with blazing cheeks,

I open my phone.

5) Mean Friends

Hide behind your screen,

Sending vitriol alone.

Together with friends.

6) All the Wrong Places

Happiness dies here.

Alone in your Facebook feed.

Together, we live.

7) Sharing a Life, Alone

A clock on the wall,

keeps us in sync, together,

alone on Tik Tok.

8) A Not-So Funny Thing Happened

Falling on my ass.

Wishing I were alone but,

laughing together.

9) Knock First

A roommate should know,

alone is together when,

"I'm getting dressed here!"

10) The Literal Blind Date

Embarrassing scene?

Leave together on that date.

The blind leave alone!

sad poetrysocial commentaryperformance poetryhumor
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About the Creator

Sydney Chapman

Starting over, yet again.

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  • Annie Edwards 5 months ago

    Love the collection of senryus :)

  • Sara Frederick5 months ago

    Congratulations!

  • Natalie Wilkinson5 months ago

    Congratulations, I especially like the first three parts.

  • Real Poetic5 months ago

    Congratulations!!! 🎊🎉🎈

  • Raymond G. Taylor5 months ago

    10 for the price of one! Well done and congratulations on your win

  • JBaz5 months ago

    You hit on a lot of very relatable topics and real life events Congratulations

  • Thanks all for the support!

  • Grz Colm5 months ago

    Excellent job here! Much relatable and enjoyed your thoughtful, technological slant to the material! Congrats on your fantastic second place win! 😊👏👏🎉🎉

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    Congratulations on 2nd place win!💕❤️❤️

  • E.K. Daniels5 months ago

    Congrats on the win!

  • Novel Allen5 months ago

    Nicely done. Congrats.

  • Kristen Balyeat5 months ago

    Congrats on your win!!! 💫

  • Dana Crandell5 months ago

    Congratulations!

  • Joe Patterson6 months ago

    Great collection.

  • Omggg, so many of these were extremely relatable!

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