All the Leaves Are Brown
In Response to Poppy's Colour prompt!
All
the
Brown
Leaves
Dead
Leaves
Part of the process
Brown
grass
Dead
grass
Part of the process
Before
the
green
Before
the
yellow
Before the multi-coloured, multi-layered blooms of spring and summer
Comes
the
Brown
Beautiful
Brown
*
Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: This is another entry/piece for Poppy's color prompt. I chose brown for reasons...well outlined above.
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About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!
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Comments (13)
I have always found brown to be a deep, warm colour! Thank you for giving it some appreciation!
And the sky is greyyyyyy 😉 Loved this 😇
Chocolate is brown. Chocolate is dead. I eat chocolate. I am dead. Lol, just ignore me. Oh wait another one. I am brown. I am dead. Lol, I'm so sorry Sir Paul. I don't know what's gotten into me. But I loved your poem!
This was such a creatively inspiring piece. I loved the repitition of 'part of the process' and how all the short lines build up to 'Before the multi-coloured, multi-layered blooms of spring and summer'. So impactful, well done!
Brown--the color of the fertile.
A brilliant entry, it's simple elegance almost makes me feel the season again!
And the circle is whole - nicely done.
Hi Paul ~ As I mentioned in 'Sugar Daddy' readers pick out what brings them into reads. Remembering: In my 'yute I cruised Sunset Blvd with my top down blasting 'California Dreaming/Mama's and Papa's ~ "All the Leaves are BROWN" Thanks for the memories J-bud in L.A.
Love the emphasis on the process. Awesome entry! (Yes, I was singing, too.)
I love the underlying meaning I’m drawing from this piece. Beautiful, Pal! Great entry!
And the sky is gray, I've been for a walk on this winter's day... Great poem. Had me singing Mamas and the Papas
Poor brown leaves but so pretty still.
Nice work I loved it ❤️🤗 I hope my stories get to the top one day 😪💔