All Hallow’s Eve
A Journey Between the Veil
Intergalactic wayfarer, greetings to you and yours!
After journeys long and worries sore,
Give beams, nodes and maps a rest
In this our corner of the world, lest
You are lost let me be your guide…
Gather close as I let
You in on a little fête
Some call Halloween,
Samhain or All Hallows Eve:
As now the Earth tilts,
a chill rides the air and lilts
upon deciduous leaves losing their green,
on Carnival tents that line the seams
of towns in spades,
on candy apples sugaring the mouths of babes,
on pumpkins carried from farms
under overalled arms
while Spider weaves names
and Crow laughs along with the games.
That is the autumnal setting
So here is the lore—betting
years grow yet more of it to tell
than ghouls, goblins and witches’ spells:
As late bright days slide to early dark,
the season mirrors life’s brief ark—
A hard-toiled harvest
ending in wintry burial rest.
With so many lives who’ve come before,
Do not fear, gentle traveler, but be warned
that All Hallows Eve is the Deads’ Day
To uprise from hillock and brae
To rejoin the fray of those corporeal, blood-blighted and warm. Spirits roil
and commune while we don clever guise
and build bonfires high
to stay them off our course.
Galavanting in the streets
We demand sweets, singing “trick or treat,”
Decked as characters old and new—
Some who may even look like you.
Seeking fright we tell stories, play undulating tunes to dance and sway.
To some it may be riddled with camp and gore,
But know that its roots are at the door
of all that is mystic and ethereal,
The thin veil between fabled and material,
Boundaries transferred and transgressed
much like your intergalactic quest.
So please take no offense
To bereaved revelry or delirious hubris,
Nor begrudge us our little peccadilloes and superstitions,
From your inter and other-worldly position
of science and conquest,
but after All Hallows Eve is done, pray give this weary ghost a rest.
About the Creator
Kate Kastelberg
-cottage-core meets adventure
-revels in nature, mystery and the fantastical
-avoids baleful gaze of various eldritch terrors
-your Village Witch before it was cool
-under command of cats and owls
-let’s take a Time Machine back to the 90s
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Beautiful ride!
That's such an interesting approach, Halloween must look like the oddest of festivals from the outside!