Alien Girl
A haiku-chain poem about feeling desolate and my experiences with loneliness during my elementary school years
No one wanted me!
All the kids kept me inside
a small prison box.
Journals, books and toys
were my friends I could speak to
at recess and lunch.
Friendships were useless;
Friends would melt like oil
and burn out fast.
The kids were people,
I was not a real person;
I was a martian.
I despised recess;
Recess was like attending
a mandated club.
Schoolmates hated me.
I became the black sheep of
each young family.
Loneliness changed me.
It made me a gift
that no one wished for.
Thank you for taking the time to read this haiku-chain poem I wrote. If you've been through the same thing as me in elementary school, I'm sure we have something in common. If you enjoyed reading it, please give it a ❤️, share it with others and send me a tip/pledge to show your appreciation and support. To find and read more of my Vocal publications, please subscribe to me and visit my public profile. Feel free to connect and follow me on Instagram. Until next time!
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About the Creator
Talia Devora
Poetess, visual artist and lifestyle/quiz writer! My pastimes include reading, sleeping, gaming, music, fitness, etc! Be yourselves, be kind and value life! Let's connect and be friends!
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Outstanding
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Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (3)
Melancholy well expressed!!! Awesome job!!!❤️❤️💕
I hope you feel better now. I read this poem and I know the feeling of loneliness. Such a great poem.
🥹❤️🥰🌈It’s Not Right for anyone else to Feel this way about themselves 🫶🏾😍💯😘Nice Piece‼️