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Afraid of the Dark

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By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 months ago โ€ข Updated 3 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
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Afraid of the Dark
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when the morning came...

I passed mustered my pity from my face...

I seek out your tenderness, but there wasn't a Trace...

I felt alone and rescinded...

If you love me then why did you leave?...

You're all so powerful but how could you let me make this of me?

I feel ashamed to smile...

I regret giving in to the temptation of Allowing the Realization of imperfections to diminish my character.

Tell me How do you stand in the light?

How do you know what is right?

I'm awake in the morning, but it's still hard to sleep at twilight.

I pray, but I don't know if you can hear me...

I always believe so I must take my chances...

When the lights go out and I'm afraid of the Dark, will you use your light to guide me?

I was Lost and,

Digging through for your Everlasting Love โค๏ธ

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  • Tiffany Gordon 3 months ago

    Beautiful work! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ

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  • Wowww this was so beautiful!

  • Lamar Wiggins3 months ago

    Wow! I love all your poems. This one is no exception. The title is perfect! Definitely got a ๐Ÿ’– from me.

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