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Adulthood: An Introduction

"It's a dangerous business...going out your door..."

By Loryne AndaweyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Adulthood: An Introduction
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They were innocent

Until time introduced them

To Experience

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Loryne Andawey

Health, Happiness & Abundance.

Currently enjoying the company of Francis, Mike, C.H., Gammastack, Michelle, Cosimo, Kristen, Bronson, Bella, Talia, Sean, Babs, Kelli, Rick, Dharrsheena, Heather, Gina and many, many more!

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  • Mike Singleton - Mikeydredabout a year ago

    Very well said

  • Lauren J. Bennettabout a year ago

    This was really good and tugged on my heart strings a little. Great work!!

  • Deborah Robinsonabout a year ago

    So true!

  • Gina B.about a year ago

    I really love this one. So much depth!

  • Vadim Kaganabout a year ago

    Deep. Concise. Excellent.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Wow, you said so much in those nine words. Simply amazing!

  • Whoaaaa, this was so deep! Well done!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    oh, this says a lot. Well done.

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    So true and well-said! :) Wonderful!

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a year ago

    Experience can either be earned, gained, or thrust upon us. We're not always in control of choosing what experiences that we go through. More often than not, each experience that we go through is less of our own decision, but sometimes an effect of our choices that we've made. Some doors once opened cannot be closed. Thus is the gateway of time and its partner, experience.

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    I love the simplicity of this sobering truth. Time to graduate into life. Thanks for sharing.

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