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Abracadabrian?

Zeal of the Scribe

By RL StevensonPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - January 2024
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By RL Stevenson

Abracadabrian? Hmm, a style I’ve not known.

Borne from phonemic -- a class all its own.

Clash of the tongue, against lips, teeth, and gum.

Does one even care for this blithering song?

Enter the dragon, with its roaring vibrations; the

Fierceness of fricatives and wily ‘cantations.

Give ear, give song, pour full out libations.

Hoist up the cup and be drunken with mood.

If one nary besets it, ‘tis more than a prude -- as this piece is in

jest… a mere lit’ry cartoon.

Kinder in thoughts, childlike and free, a

linguistic circus to the Nth degree.

Mingle a jingle with poetic affair, the words of a

nerdling, constructed with care.

Oh, my dear Lord, this piece, I declare!

Please, someone stop it, it’s now run amuck.

Quacky and quirky – hey wait, what the phluck?

Reel it on back. Now,

steady she blows.

This ship’s gone off course, and near time to close.

Under swift tongue and cheek, by

verse, deprehend.

What, it’s now over, time’s up…I must end?

X-ercise your rights to write as you please.

Yield not to censure, to praise nor appease. For the

Zeal of the scribe is ever to tease.

humor
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RL Stevenson

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Outstanding

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  3. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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  • Anna 3 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳

  • LOVED THIS

  • Reiley4 months ago

    Absolutely LOVED this. Made me chuckle a few times as well. You have a way with words, and are extremely creative!

  • Andrea Corwin 4 months ago

    Fabulously creative!

  • Ed Heerkens4 months ago

    Nice story! I loved

  • TK Cummings4 months ago

    <3

  • Amy Sanginario4 months ago

    I love this. I feel lots of trickster energy in this poem- but in a playful way. Ah and the zeal of the scribe IS to tease! 🙂👏

  • LaTonya Staples4 months ago

    Congratulations on top story. This was so wonderful to read

  • A. Lenae4 months ago

    Yes, yes! Enchanting and so well done! That last line also tasted like a great dessert that's full of antioxidants or something - it settled in harmoniously and was delicious.

  • J. R. Lowe4 months ago

    I love this! What a fun read - it reads like a witch chanting a spell 🪄

  • Licia4 months ago

    Absolutely magical. Congrats! ☺️

  • Lacy Loar-Gruenler4 months ago

    Charming, RL, so well done! Congratulations on TS, too!

  • Raymond G. Taylor4 months ago

    Brilliantly done. You made all 26 lines count. Good luck in the challenge and congrats on the TS

  • Wow! Best! Congratulations too on TS! :-)

  • Aaliyah Madison4 months ago

    Congratulations on your Top Story,

  • Sandra Matos4 months ago

    Excellent!! Both fun and technically on point! Good luck!

  • Wow! So deserving of Top Story! The humour, rhythm and rhyme were great… A perfect fit for me… “Kinder in thoughts, childlike and free, a linguistic circus to the Nth degree.”

  • Test4 months ago

    Absolutely fabulous entry. I loved the rhyme. Congrats on the TS :)

  • Kenny Penn4 months ago

    Brilliant! I about choked laughing at this line: “Quacky and quirky – hey wait, what the phluck?” Really good entry RL!

  • Melissa Ingoldsby4 months ago

    Excellent piece 😘a possibility of placing in the challenge I believe 👌🥰🥰💕

  • Gargie S Anand4 months ago

    That's such a good composition!

  • D.K. Shepard4 months ago

    Incredible! What a fun read!

  • J.P. Williamson4 months ago

    I really enjoyed this 😄 congrats on Top Story! My entry for this challenge was nowhere near as fun as this...

  • Dasani Jones4 months ago

    I have to follow now!

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