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A small piece of us

—happy birthday 💓to a special person, father and partner

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
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A small piece of us
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in the whirlwind of exacting time,

We found a small piece of us gently moving toward the light

I found you, a truly lovely soul

That only just came into a good sort of healing

The place we used to visit

Our secret place.

Your tenderness enclosed the suture of a deeply stagnating ravine

So closed off from oxygen and movement,

Now that is a free-flowing space of cathartic energy

Our love now has found that small space of us

And it is our own,

All our own

The past is no longer our weight

But our cloudy sky

Our secret place where you and I

Are finally one.

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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

I am a published author on Patheos.

I am Bexley is published by Resurgence Novels here.

The Half Paper Moon is available on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.

My novella Carnivorous is to be published by Eukalypto soon! Coming soon

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  • Grz Colm4 months ago

    Very lovely and excellent work!! ☺️👏

  • k eleanor4 months ago

    Happy birthday to your husband!! And Merry Christmas!! ❤❤

  • Awww, this was so sweet and touching! Happy Birthday to your husband and Merry Christmas! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

  • Happy Birthday & Blessed Holidays to both of you.

  • Lovely words sis and a probable Top Story, Seasons greetings

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