My hand in your hand
I fall
Deep. Deep
Soft I land
Safe
You hold me
Cry-You say
Your pain- is safe with me
I seep a inch to love
A bond is here
Can I rely on you
My hand is in your hand
I fall
A slow seep
Deep deep
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Antoinette L Brey
I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure
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Can't speak yet she hasn't forgotten how to think Can't feel yet she still knows what is real Cornered she just cowers Tallying the hours until she's free Struggling in darkness to find the key's grace That will relieve her from this suffocating embrace
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Comments (10)
Beautiful!
This was a loving and heartwarming piece. Good job!
Wonderful
Love it 🥰
This is so well written! I enjoyed your poem a lot!
gorgeous work Antoinette!!!!
Oh this was so touching and lovely! Beautiful poem!
Fantastic!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
It flow so well, this poetry. It’s time for me to take a deep sleep 💤🙂
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