A Shower of Emotions

I weep as the shower hit my head,

thinking about the day I had,

Though I'm told men should never show emotion,

I'm just a boy with a broken heart in motion.

Like the bugs that appear in the downpour,

My sorrows are released with each shower.

Despite the struggles that come my way,

I'm determined to make life better every day.

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I can't help but feel a little lost,

With no one to help me pay the cost.

My courage and strength I must find,

My broken heart I must not bind.

waterdrops wash away all my pain,

New beginnings arise in each refrain.

Though I may stumble, I will still try,

I'll never give up, no matter the sky.