While on my evening jog today,
Encountered a snake along the way
Was looking gloomy, as he laid on the road
But in that moment, I felt deep concern,
Wishing somehow his troubles could unturn.
I stopped, concerned for his life
He seemed to be burdened, heavy and tight
After pausing for a bit more,
Emotions spoke
Could understand his struggles to the core
He shared his story, and I lent an ear,
A dispute with his mate, it was clear,
I offered comfort, a heartfelt plea,
-This is no reason to end a life
He should go and chat with his wife.
Assumed he could understand me somehow
I continued on my journeys track
As he crossed the roads crack
As I jogged on, a thought remained,
Understanding and love, always sustained.
About the Creator
Gargie S Anand
Gargie is a graduate in Economics and English. She loves to write about tiny things happening around. She tries to capture every moment of life through her writing. A soul who believes her powers lie within the pen and a paper.
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Snakes are not my favourites… but this was a sweet tale.
Awww, this was so sweet of you! Loved your poem!
Saw a few here! They are beautiful and scary at the same time.
Outstanding work