*December 26th 2021 I ask my partner if he would like a title upgrade.
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Your love has been a true lifesaver,
You’re like a knight, but no horse,
Instead, a flashy lightsaber.
Already you own the One that rules them all,
What kind of precious could top
What’s displayed on the nerd-cave wall?
Frozen in carbonite, black diamonds aglow,
I think of a lifetime of saying ‘I love you,’
To receive your reply, 'I know.’
Still, I asked you - a silly, nervous, mess,
If you’d be mine for forever,
and, happily, you said yes!
About the Creator
C.D. Hoyle
C.D. Hoyle is a writer who is also a manual therapist, business owner, mother, co-parent, and partner. You will find her writing sometimes gritty, most times poignant, and almost always a little funny. C.D. Hoyle lives in Toronto.
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This was so sweet!