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A(lone)

You don't know that I spend days talking to you with out saying a word.

By Bex JordanPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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Shadow of Myself (Photo: @UmaSabirah)

I need to be a

lone, until the voice in my

head becomes my own.

sad poetrylove poemsheartbreak
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About the Creator

Bex Jordan

She/They. Writer. Gardener. Cat-Lover. Nerd. Always looking up at the sky or down at the ground.

Profile photo by Román Anaya (https://www.roman-anaya.com/).

Instagram: @UmaSabirah

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  • Paul Stewart28 days ago

    so few words, incredible amount of emotion! so good, Bex

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    Oh my. That really says a lot. Very well done.

  • Veronica Coldironabout a month ago

    It is SO hard to get this much impact out of a haiku! Beautiful work!

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